Got E

I got “E” from the assignment! It is not good, in general. But for me, it was better than ever before.

Today’s class starts by two Dead Celebrity Surprise. They were great, one was so easy to listen, and the other was well organized.

About feed back of writing assignment, I noticed three points of bad sentences: too many words, long subjects, and passive subject.

“Too many words” means there are a lot of same meaning words in one sentence. It makes a reader hard to understand the text.

“long subjects” means subject is long to recognize which is subject and it often makes grammatical mistakes.

“passive subject” also relates to long subjects. It often long and makes wrong verb.


But today, I spoke more about than ever. It was enjoyable. I will keep this for end of the semester.