Nozick feedback

Today’s English class was Nozick feedback and longer individual presentation. In lecture I did not know the word “punctuation”=reading mark, but now I got it.

Nosick feedback:
1. long sentence can be divided by punctuation, or put the mark of illustration before the long part.
2. capitalism opposition> opposition to capitalism
3. If we… sometimes lacks subject. If we > let us
4. difference between OO, which/who XX, and OO which/who XX is that, former means all OO are XX, but latter limits OO only which/who is XX.
5. reason for one’s –ing or why S+V, strive(=to make a great effort to achieve)> aim
6. after ;, we can use capital if the sentence follows is long.
7. however should not be used in sentences, but can used with , , or first and last

Longer Individual presentation:
1. why/what/how are important
2. figure is standard of business communication
3. good chance is not necessary to say


present= give a gift (not represent)


About feedback of my assignment, I found there are many absences of “the”. And even Soviet Union, an unique object, needs “the”.

And there are some spelling mistake and chose of word such as present( not represent).

I will try to care about them.